Hey IsmejKaya,
Sorry for the delay with getting back to you on this one.
This is looking very nice, you've picked up on the key style elements of the White Harbor area. No problem with the shading of the stone bricks, you're right that it's biome dependent, the one you were looking for was Extreme Hills, but all good!
Only other small notes:
- We avoid sticking candles to walls like vanilla torches, since they'd probably fall off. Try just placing them on a table/bench/create. Drinking a potion of night vision helps when taking screenshots too if lighting's a concern.
- Since this building's a wine merchant you're right that they'd likely have a large stock of produce. Just be wary about overdoing it with citrus fruits since they'd be pretty rare in the North.
I think at this point you'll learn more from being an actual builder, so consider yourself approved!
Please make sure to read the New Builder guide here:
http://westeroscraft.wikia.com/wiki/Newbie_guide
The next step is to make a probation thread in the Probation Forum. You can start building at any open locations on the server - you can find a list of these at /warp build, although it's sometimes outdated, so I would also recommend just asking people in-game and checking the forums for recent project happenings. You can also toggle open plot markers on the dynmap mc.westeroscraft.com
A probie leader should post on your thread within a week or so and continue to give you constructive feedback on your houses for the next month (and help be your entry point into the server community in general), although as sometimes the probie leaders are busy IRL you may need to be patient while they find the time to respond to you. But message me again if a probie leader hasn't contacted you within two weeks, or if they're taking a while to respond. I would also encourage you to seek feedback from project leaders and other builders/mods. At the end, you'll be made full builder assuming everything goes smoothly.
I'd suggest you also start thinking about what projects you might like to work on, we encourage new builders to first work on "mini-projects" which are small one off areas of other projects, e.g. a hamlet, mill, quarry, and flagged as open for mini-apps by the project leader. Once you've done a few of these you'll be able to apply for a full project.
Make sure to stay in touch and let us know if you're losing interest, not finding enough work to do, or if there's any issues with the probation.
Welcome aboard and I'll see you in Westeros!