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Ammika

Playwright
Hey phondi, we worked on the stonemason together so great work there. Remember those tips!!!!!!!
For the house in musgood, the exterior looks good, nice gradient, the interiors are nice and simple, love that its not cluttered! The only nit picky thing I have there is the thatch carpet in the house. Put a full block under and around some of the carpet so it doesn't just look like 2 randomly placed carpet blocks. Makes it look fuller and more complete that way.
The yard that you have there are a couple of small things to address. First, the pile of dirt in the middle of the yard? I don't see a hole anywhere so it makes no sense why they just have a pile of dirt there. Secondly- get more creative with your veggie patches! /warp hg and /warp mallery have some beautiful examples of vegetable patches. Change the ground to mud, pine needles, fallen leaves, instead of just having dirt/gravel.
 

phondi

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Prodation build 3#: fisher, /warp bfhf2
x:-6470 z:7508

Probation build 4#: farmer /warp ss
x:-1523 z:10871

Probation build 5# farmhand /warp whamlet1
x:-4197 z:-2991
 

phondi

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probation build 6# farmer /warp ambrosetown2
x: -2683 z: 16981

probation build 7# farmer /warp ramsaysmill
x: 4612 z: -8847

probation build 8# tanner/furrier /warp norrey
x: 887 z: -15025

probation build 9# blacksmith /warp ramsaysmill
x: 4648 z: -8838

probation build 10# vagon owner /warp dfringfort
x: 6143 z: -7919

probation build 11# fishseller /warp ambrosetown2
x: -2684 z: 16993
 
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Ammika

Playwright
We went over all of these builds in game. I noticed that with your veggies you're still tending to use the same ones. Try out new vegetables/herbs!!!!
 

phondi

Storyteller
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probie build 12# weaver /warp haigh
x: -478 z: 4655

probie build 13# grain mill /warp ambrosetown2
x: -2747 z: 17050

probie build 14# farmer /warp stonysept
x -1513 z: 10878

probie build 15# chandler /warp norrey
x: 902 z: -15018

probie build 16# apothecarist /warp haigh
x: -447 z: 4648

probie build 17# cooper /warp ambrose
x: -3025 z: 17199
 

phondi

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probie build 18# carpenter /warp musgood
x: 3327 z: 17499

probie build 19# fletcher /warp norrey
x: 833 z: 14961

probie build 20# stonemason /warp musgood
x: 3323 z: 17518

probie build 21# barber /warp dd
x: 5114 z: 11419

probie build 22# residential /warp dd
x: 5127 z: 11425
 

Veggie

The Old Bear
Just wanted to post to commend you on being so responsive to feedback at Duskendale.

I know how intimidating/frustrating it can be to get a house with melons inside and out, but you've addressed each point fabulously!
 
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probie build 24# - 31# Duskendale fishermans'
24# x: 5422 z: 11655
25# x: 5429 z: 11648
26# x: 5437 z: 11645
27# x: 5448 z: 11645
28# x: 5473 z: 11605
29# x: 5476 z: 11615
30# x: 5387 z: 11671
31# x: 5381 z: 11667
 
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