Very nice work on this house! There's not much that I can fault with it; I think you captured the Fairmarket style quite well. The only feedback I have is a picky thing - never put candles on walls like this, since the wax would melt and fall off. Just place them vertically on surfaces.
Anyways, I think you'll learn more as a probationary builder on the server at this point, so consider yourself approved!
To get promoted to builder, ask a moderator in-game next time you catch one online. The next step is to read over the New Builder guide, found here: http://westeroscraft.wikia.com/wiki/Newbie_guide
And also make yourself a probation thread in the probation forum.
You can start building at any open locations on the server - you can find these at /warp build (possibly outdated as people forget to update it sometimes), and also by going to our dynmap and toggling "Open Plot", which is a new feature that we're testing, or otherwise just asking around to see which builds are open. Also, you can ask a mod to set you up with a plot in the Test world.
A probie leader should post on your thread within a week or so, give constructive feedback on your houses for the next month, and help be your entrypoint into the server community in general. As sometimes the probie leaders can be busy IRL, I also highly suggest seeking out feedback from project leaders and other online builders. At the end, you'll be made full builder.
Welcome to the team, I look forward to building with you!