I have a few points-feedback on how Ghaston Grey, should look.
So my points are:
1)Canon sais its a crumbling castle, with just one tower recked to shit, it doesnt make a castle crumblings. Parren is a crumbling castle, not Ghaston Grey, so the battlements, should be at most parts ruined, with the ramparts(the teethy part) missing pieces, and with cracks etc.
2)The walls need more cracks, generaly and whatever roofs exist, should be made with part, the block used now, part northern wood, and should have holes in it, with wooden support columns holding it up.
3)As for the towers, they too should more more ruined, like with their roofs, missing, wattle on the windows, maybe some cages hanging, just to add to the unpleasant-ness, and generaly less fancy ints too.
4)As for the harbour, there should be a prison ship on one of the wharfs, because we see some supplies having dropped over, and I dont think, that the ship would have left so fast, so that the supplies would still be there. There should also be a small table, for a guard, and an officer on the wharf, to write the names of the new inmates. (Imo one of the wharfs should be kinda ruined too)
5)Also, it needs, poles for whipping, in the context, of misconduct with the guards, Because we know of generaly how bruttal the Dornish are, so those practices, would be fitting. Even the fancier rooms should be less fancy, than they are now, and should have a bit of mud of floor, like uncleaned poop. As it is considered a horrible place to be sent, so imo, the smells of feaces, dead bodies, urin, and rotten food, should be a constant. There should also be mass graves in the compound, for people dying from the conditions, a space for an outdour kicthen pot-shop for the prisoners, so that they can eat something, the officers and guards will be eating from the kitchen.
Ah, and also there should be a more gallows and cages generaly everywhere.
( that, less a piece of feedback, than my own personal opinion, as I believe, that the presence of more cages, and more gallows, would be enough, to remind the prisoners, where they are, a place of death. So dead bodies, deteriorating, under the scorching dornish sun, would be quite the example making)
As for the log, for cutting, heads that shouldnt be needed. In medieval times, head cutting was reserved for nobles only, as an honourable and swift death sentence, in addition to hanging, plus, the dornish would surely want a more agonising death for their bad guys, so hanging, under the sun, would be quite a punishment.
I wouldnt say, a torture room is needed, as working constantly, under the burning Dornish sun, would be torture enough.
Thats, all I have to say.
6)Ah, also the island, feels a bit too smooth, for a simple rock. Should be a bit more "textured" if you will. Like with smaller rocky islets surrounding it.
Having, a personal experience with extremely rocky islands, by living in Crete, I believe, those are well made points, at least for the island.
Here an example, of a fortress on top of a rock, so that I can prove, my knowledge of rocky islands. (The island is called, Ήμερη Γραμβούσα, translation: Tamed Gramvousa, so imagine how the wild one looks)
Thats Wild Gramvousa.
I hope, you all agree with me.
Everything here, is with good intent, and I surely don't wish to cause a heated argument, as that is only my opinion, which I do think, that it is right.
