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Hey Iron, You did a great job on this house, I'm pretty happy with it! I have a couple pretty nitpicky things: - For the roof with the overhang, the upside-down stairs make it so you can see the slate behind the stairs as well. So it kind of defeats the point of having the upside-down stairs...

Hey Knights, finally got some time to look at the app. Here's some of the comments/feedback I have: - Although this doesn't really impact your plans at all, I think a more plausible backstory is probably that this house Long is a minor branch of the family that were put in charge of the Wolf's...

Hey Des, the holdfast looks great! Will you have any houses or farmland or anything around it?

Hi Maj & Endy, The mods have reviewed this redo appeal, and decided that Wyl is allowed to be redone on the basis of the new canon added in Fire & Blood, which suggests that a significant restructuring of the boneway (which includes Wyl) may be necessary. Anyone is now free to apply for Wyl...

As a longer term goal, perhaps we could even link up the Chronicle into an Asana-like system which is integrated with forum project approvals.

Hey Iron, You did a good job on this house! You captured the woodwright style pretty good overall. I just have some mostly picky points of feedback: - I agree you made your house a slight too wide (just 2 blocks). Narrowing the width slightly should also help with the interiors a bit too. -...

Hey Xeson, Beautiful work! You've pretty much nailed everything about the Woodwright style. I don't have anything to add. Since you've already done all of the other challenges I would ask, and they all looked pretty good, I'm pretty confident in your building skills. Consider yourself...

It should be allowed, I trust guests to make their own decisions on how they want to explore. Just need to get a list of perm changes to an admin who can actually do stuff.

Perhaps you could move the cinematic to one of the "introduction"/"about us" pages, so it's still fairly obvious but not the first thing you see when trying to navigate the website?

Hey Xeson, Sorry for the delay in responding! This is one of the best apps I've seen recently, I don't think it'll take very long at all to get you fully up to server style. Since you posted a lot of houses, I won't be able to feedback them all in super detail, but since your more recent houses...

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The chronicle section is nice! I rather like the cinematic background of the current homepage. Is there any particular reason for getting rid of that? What specific gains do you see from the new site over what we have right now?

Hey Ikke, Just a quick note looking at your tests, it seems like you're following some very outdated examples of Northern builds for your styles. Some examples of outdated things are the overuse of carved wood (remember, each panel of carved would would need to be actually carved by an...

Hey Maj/endy, Everything looks pretty good to me! I'm happy you managed to make the snowy mountains around that area look better and less noisy. The abandoned hamlet and lake is very cool too, the best part of the project imo. I left one melon near westwatch by the bridge where the the terra...

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damn I cut myself on this post

Hey Ikke, looks good! Here's some feedback I have on the plotting/style: - Don't plot bubble yards, like the one here. They should have linear walls (these can be diagonal though), and should probably be a bit larger as well. I highly recommend plotting the yards & fields last, and doing all of...

Hey Iron, Looks pretty good, you're definitely getting better! Your interiors seem mostly fine by this point (with a few important points, though), while your exteriors still need a little bit of improvement. You did fix most of the issues I mentioned in the previous post though, and the...

I really liked the previous version of the bridge, and I don’t think it needed to be changed. The drawbridge ruined the silhouette a bit imo, it seems a bit too cluttered with it. I can’t imagine many of the boats going down the river up to that point would be tall ships with sails or anything...

Hey Iron, Thanks for the update! Your house looks much better, you've made a big improvement. That said, there are still a number of major things that need to be improved before you're up to current standards, so I will jump right into feedback. Keep in mind that most of this is pickier stuff...