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Just to state for the record, I did say that Awb could continue making changes to the copy on the production server to address the feedback. That's not an indication that Starcat has made a decision about the mini yet
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I admit I was over dramatic with the first few lines of that message but the critique I think is justified. There's stuff you have done well/interestingly but only so much I could write before bed last night.
I was aware you'd changed the kitchen before any requests were made to keep...
There was an amazing summer kitchen/bakery in the wooden annex to the manor. This also had a lot of storage
The storage is similar, though the inclusion of goods which need cool storage and working like meat and cheese are great. The roofbeams are kept the same, following the idea of the more...
I don't understand the thought process behind a lot of the changes to Antlersmanor
The solution to finishing off a room for cooler kitchen activities like butter churning + small meatstore was...
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.... to turn it into a pot single shelf pot storage + dark meat cellar with a stone...
Relation to House Gardener is also what legitimises some houses so maybe in the cellar of Crayne, Peake and so one there could be some. Also House Manderly would display them as part of the Order of the Green Hand
Just swapping the leaves and bark of the weirwood would be enough.
Considering the migratory nature of many Umber peoples, I'd think they'd have weirwoods at a seasonal settlement site rather than the fortification. Since a summer or winter croft would be more important culturally.
That's...
Second on this. The ints were of a high standard with sensible layout already, so the wheel doesn't have to be reinvented. In fact, I'd been using the interiors of the whole mini as a good reference to anyone wanting to do noble/wealthy structures and how to use space appropriately. Love your...
Adding on to this, the cheese making area would be far far larger than the butchery. Mostly because it would be in use much more often than the butchery. Cheese making requires substantial storage, good idea with the cheese cave. However, it looks like a very forced, artificial opening thats in...
I don't remember any quotes that could indicate material of the bridge but I'm on team natural bridge.
However I think increasing the scale of the bridge would make it feel like something that needed to be guarded. Rn it feels like the castle would be almost unassailable on the end of that...
Since this is downhill of the Hill of Rhaenys, I'd put in at least 2 wells in this area. This section near the wall would be perfect for having a big laundry business or two.
The street of Silk would have huge demand for clean cloth. Washerwomen would be a dime a dozen but their industry would...
DutchGuard while reading through I saw a typo/error in the Yronwood main section. The Yronwoods ruled over half of Dorne under the title High King of Dorne or King of the Dornish, not as Kings of Yronwood.
Their former titles included Master of the Green Hills (unknown), Green Belt (area below...
Could biome dependency change smoke colour? Could we have a thicker but less defined vertical movement in the north, for instance, where we see smoke used as steam a lot in the northern mountains and from hotsprings.
Could Mesa biome have thick smoke like that from a wet or dirty fire? It's a...
ramshackle houses against walls are definitely what happened going on against the outside. Tyrion had them burned down. I don't remember that happening inside the walls as well.
At least having the plotting get denser from a yard/farms point would be good, though difficult to illustrate.
This is a space that the city would have grown into after the walls were finished so I'd suggest trying to make remnants of old field/large yard plotting, maybe have more rectangular shapes of "blocks" with a few yards clustered inside. Lower density w/ more multi tenants, rather than high...
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