Probation: shel
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The Spring 2023 edition of The Rookery is now out! Take a look to see the latest builds, guides, progress and development updates on the upcoming 1.18.2 switch. You can read it here:
https://indd.adobe.com/view/f943da18-ed77-4d55-845d-fee9bfa14247
Build 5: 1595X 37Y 12710Z
/warp rollingford
Low class woodcutter with large yard in small hamlet. Diagonal house.
/warp rollingford
Low class woodcutter with large yard in small hamlet. Diagonal house.
Hey shel! I'll claim you as a leader 
! It looks like you've got the swing of how this works! I'm excited but I'm a bit busy so I hope you don't mind the slight delay on the feedback. I'll try to get to you as soon as possible tomorrow <3
Per Usual: My feedback is important but always remember that if the project lead has feedback it must be addressed as well!
! It looks like you've got the swing of how this works! I'm excited but I'm a bit busy so I hope you don't mind the slight delay on the feedback. I'll try to get to you as soon as possible tomorrow <3Per Usual: My feedback is important but always remember that if the project lead has feedback it must be addressed as well!
ThanksHey shel! I'll claim you as a leader
Per Usual: My feedback is important but always remember that if the project lead has feedback it must be addressed as well!
and I'll be sure to recognize that.
Rattlez
Messenger
Hel Shel! Your houses at Deddington are looking great, both exterior and interior. The only mistakes i could find were with the brick pallette and the woodern roof, however these are only small things and imo you are pretty much on the same level as most builders.
I work in the army so im only home at weekends, try to catch me online if possible, otherwise just fix the few minot mistakes and Ill aprove your buildings xD
I work in the army so im only home at weekends, try to catch me online if possible, otherwise just fix the few minot mistakes and Ill aprove your buildings xD
Build 11: -2951X 56Y 8869Z
/warp dedham2
Poor farmer, wife recently died during childbirth, so a family of 3. Large yard.
PS: Can someone explain to me what's happening? I know I sound super rude here but it's not sarcastic at all: I really don't know, all of the other probies are getting reviewed and even though I have many more nothing is happening... Am I doing something wrong?
/warp dedham2
Poor farmer, wife recently died during childbirth, so a family of 3. Large yard.
PS: Can someone explain to me what's happening? I know I sound super rude here but it's not sarcastic at all: I really don't know, all of the other probies are getting reviewed and even though I have many more nothing is happening... Am I doing something wrong?
Ammika
Herald
Since Benja only is on the server for a limited amount of time I'll fill in as a part time leader
First things first the house at Deddington is fine, just remember the stuff we talked about in game.
The sawmill at Erenfordham2 is nice as well- remember to follow and fix feedback provided by the project leader.
The house at Dedham2 is good, however im starting to notice that you like to place the coin block a lot. Nip that habit in the bud because most people (especially not the lower class) had money laying around. Also, make sure you dont use 4 types of wood in 1 house, replace the spruce ceiling with jungle/oak.
First things first the house at Deddington is fine, just remember the stuff we talked about in game.
The sawmill at Erenfordham2 is nice as well- remember to follow and fix feedback provided by the project leader.
The house at Dedham2 is good, however im starting to notice that you like to place the coin block a lot. Nip that habit in the bud because most people (especially not the lower class) had money laying around. Also, make sure you dont use 4 types of wood in 1 house, replace the spruce ceiling with jungle/oak.
Sincere apologies for the delay... To start off:
Uffering House:
Nice work!! No complaints here
Sweetwillow House:
I think this looks good! =) My only comment is on the double furnace, I would replace it with a single furnace or (if you wanna go for the 2 wide fireplace) look at some /warp ikea examples at the fireplace examples it gives there!
Rollingford House:
Good work! I only see two fixes here: In the kitchen area, instead of the double cabinets I would replace one part with a kitchen bench with drawers and / or a wood slab next to it (I'll leave an example above the house). As for the yard, I would put a wattle fence on the side to prevent the tools showing on both sides.
Deddington House & ErenfordHam2 House:
Ammika addressed (<3)
Wull Hamlet 7 House:
Good work again!!! I only have one thing to mention: The shelf above the table looks like it has no support on the end, with a crate and wood up there that looks awfully heavy, I would put a slab on the end to make it more stable
Bandavassal1 House:
Good work!! I have only a few things to mention here: For a poor farmer they probably wouldn't have scrolls in their house (they probably couldn't read), the keg upstairs might be a bit too much for a low class house, but you might ask Enah to see if it's okay.
Good job! And I apologize it took me this long to get to this
Uffering House:
Nice work!! No complaints here
Sweetwillow House:
I think this looks good! =) My only comment is on the double furnace, I would replace it with a single furnace or (if you wanna go for the 2 wide fireplace) look at some /warp ikea examples at the fireplace examples it gives there!
Rollingford House:
Good work! I only see two fixes here: In the kitchen area, instead of the double cabinets I would replace one part with a kitchen bench with drawers and / or a wood slab next to it (I'll leave an example above the house). As for the yard, I would put a wattle fence on the side to prevent the tools showing on both sides.
Deddington House & ErenfordHam2 House:
Ammika addressed (<3)
Wull Hamlet 7 House:
Good work again!!! I only have one thing to mention: The shelf above the table looks like it has no support on the end, with a crate and wood up there that looks awfully heavy, I would put a slab on the end to make it more stable
Bandavassal1 House:
Good work!! I have only a few things to mention here: For a poor farmer they probably wouldn't have scrolls in their house (they probably couldn't read), the keg upstairs might be a bit too much for a low class house, but you might ask Enah to see if it's okay
.Good job! And I apologize it took me this long to get to this