Completed Probation: Razordawn
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Antony
Printmaker
The tavern is nice overall.
So my feedback is, more stylistic if I may say.
So I have the followings things to say:
1. Have the space of the tavern, be open, no panel/division between drinking space and the kitchen. Check the tavern/inn at Gaunt or the Ivy inn for examples. Also no need for the kitchen to be one block higher.
2. Have the sides be made of stone, like the inn at Parren, with the words sides, I mean the western and eastern sides of the building, with buttresses even.
(Now thats more of a personal preference, a suggestion, merely because I think it looks much cooler, if your personal taste is against that, I wouldn't have a single issue)
3)Remove the cracks from the chimney, it feels too brittle.
4)Remove the smoker. If you want a smoker, make a bigger one and put some firewood on its, one side.
5)Put the firewood underneath the overhang.
6)Remove the butchering stuff. Its a poor farming community, meat isn't after all a big part of their diet, and if some villager wants to kill his animal he can do it by himself. Cutting meat in the tavern can happen in the kitchen. Again, meat, didn't play that big a part, if at all.
7)Put supports underneath the overhangs, you know wooden fences and shit.
Fix those, few stuff and I'll approve!
AH... and also, welcome to the team, with those fixed, your probation is finished, and you can ask a Mod to make you a full-builder!
So my feedback is, more stylistic if I may say.
So I have the followings things to say:
1. Have the space of the tavern, be open, no panel/division between drinking space and the kitchen. Check the tavern/inn at Gaunt or the Ivy inn for examples. Also no need for the kitchen to be one block higher.
2. Have the sides be made of stone, like the inn at Parren, with the words sides, I mean the western and eastern sides of the building, with buttresses even.
(Now thats more of a personal preference, a suggestion, merely because I think it looks much cooler, if your personal taste is against that, I wouldn't have a single issue)
4)Remove the smoker. If you want a smoker, make a bigger one and put some firewood on its, one side.
5)Put the firewood underneath the overhang.
6)Remove the butchering stuff. Its a poor farming community, meat isn't after all a big part of their diet, and if some villager wants to kill his animal he can do it by himself. Cutting meat in the tavern can happen in the kitchen. Again, meat, didn't play that big a part, if at all.
7)Put supports underneath the overhangs, you know wooden fences and shit.
Fix those, few stuff and I'll approve!
AH... and also, welcome to the team, with those fixed, your probation is finished, and you can ask a Mod to make you a full-builder!
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A measly 2 years later, your feedback is addressed at /warp bullock 3163/59/9954
Antony
Printmaker
FINALY!
Right, as your probie leader, I declare your probation finaly, finished.
Congrats!
Right, as your probie leader, I declare your probation finaly, finished.
Congrats!