probation: Margaery_Tyrell_

[Margaery_Tyrell]

Hello!
This is my probation thread
first house at:

/warp eronfordHam2

low class hunter, wife works in sept, 2 children

X: -196 Y: 46 Z: 4131

 

[Ammika]

Heyo, I was approved by Banty to become a probation leader and I had already given you feedback on two of your houses so far- so I guess that means I get to be your leader lol

 

[Ammika]

So far so good, nothing awfully wrong is sticking out, you're ints are practical and I like that, the only minor thing that I see is just the over usage of the dead hare and fowl blocks. It is a hunters house yes, but maybe try to have a shed where he keeps his traps or something

 

[Margaery_Tyrell]

second house at:

/warp brandybottom

middle class class wine and brandy merchant. merchant, wife and son. 3 staff in attic. 6 people total

Coords: -7258 15299 41

 

[Ammika]

Well done Margaery! I don't have any complaints with the house externally. Interiors are fine, a bit cluttered for my taste, but they are nice.

 

[Margaery_Tyrell]

third house at:

/warp brandybottom

middle class butcher. butcher, wife and daughter. 1 worker upstairs in attic. 4 people in total

Coords: -7228 41 15295

Also there was a flower cart in front of the butcher that was available for building and I built that too, but idk if that counted as a full "build" if you know what I mean, but I still thought it wouldn't hurt to put it in.

 

[Margaery_Tyrell]

fourth house at:

/warp broom

lower class farmer. young wife and husband. 2 people total

Coords: -5028 47 14858

 

[Margaery_Tyrell]

fifth house at

/warp broom

lower class butcher. man and son. 2 people total

Coords: -5039 47 14859

 

[Margaery_Tyrell]

sixth house at

/warp broom

lower class farmer. man and 2 daughters. 3 people total

Coords: -5019 47 14854

 

[Ammika]

hey sorry for the short absence, mid terms are popping up like pimples on a dry back.

I took a look at your broom houses and all of them are appropriately and neatly furnished (kudos!)
For the Brandybottom house I noticed jack had some feedback for you so as long as you address that its an A+ house.

 

[Margaery_Tyrell]

seventh house at

/warp broom

lower class farmer. man,wife and son. 3 people total

Coords: -4971 47 14852

 

[Margaery_Tyrell]

eighth house at

/warp broom

its a barn

-4987 47 14854

 

[Margaery_Tyrell]

ninth house at

/warp broom

low-class carpenter 2 people, wife and husband

-5043 47 14856

 

[Ammika]

margaery dear all the builds look lovely <3