House #17:
-Really great job on this one! No major issues, you have gotten the style down very well! Only 2 things I noticed...
-The roof has a couple things. Id maybe add 1-2 more thatch spots on the roof, and also on the back of the roof, there is an upside down thatch. Not really sure what you were trying to do there?
-In a couple places, dirt/mud were exposed on one side. Always try to add slabs so that it doesnt seem like it eroded perfectly straight up and down. This is mainly an issue on the front of the house, just sink the flowers down 1 block maybe, or add wattle fences propping it up.
-You used trapdoors under the bed. Just use slabs, or dont do a bunkbed as trapdoors are very dated looking.
House #18: (I think this is the one with the grapes and wood roof)
-Same issue with blocks exposed on the front of the house. Just add wood halfdoors or something to make it look like a planter box.
-Some of the rafters are a little wonky, especially around the staircase. Try to simplify them, they don't always have to be going the same direction if there are other structural supports. You can try turning them against the staircase walls so that there are not the little gaps at the top.
-Upstairs, there is no need for the partition and door. It would just be unnecessarily heavy, and it complicates the space. Please remove it, and it will be much better.
-Shared yard: This counts as my review of the yard for the other 2 houses as well (which i will review at a later date). 1: No need for 2 piles of firewood, 2 clotheslines. They are neighbors, they would be happy to share with each other. You could add another veggie patch on the southwest corner perhaps.
Really nice job on this house as well! Nice job laying out the interiors, except for the extra wall upstairs.
House #19:
-You could add some white rose bushes at the bottom of the jasmine vines. It looks nice.
-Great work on the interiors! I can tell you put alot of care into them. A few minor things: 1) The 2 wide chamber pot is a bit strange looking, maybe you could add a table in there? Or some sort of washing area?
-I think the kitchen area could use a window. Perhaps add one where the clotheslines are, and just remove the bottom clothesline. You can put wool slabs to signify clothes there.
-I changed the rafters a tad inside (market with a melon) before you had rafters going into empty space, which doesn't make sense because they are not supporting anything. This way, the rafters are attached to the wall frame, making them more secure and look better as a side effect.
-Upstairs, you have a itchy straw 3 wide bed. Please change this to thatch, as itchy straw does not work for a pile bed. Just use thatch slabs and straw beds, and thatch carpets, for the desired effect. I also think you ought to add a dormer window to this room, on the west side of the house. This will break up the huge roof and add ventilation to the hot upper bedrooms.
Overall great job again! I will check the remaining ones later. Sorry to get back to you late, I have been super busy lately.
