Gealrüable
Royal Messenger
Good Morning,
I am requesting that Mistwood is exempted from the No-Redo Rule under clause 1(b) - Inadequate Cannon Clause.
1. "Instead of proper roads, they rode down crookback slashes that snaked this way and that, through clefts in huge mosscovered rocks and down deep ravines choked with blackberry brambles. Sometimes the track petered out entirely (TWoW)" - There is a distinct lack of deep ravines and crookback slashes in the project, a huge oversight that must be dealt with swiftly.
2. "Dusk found them on the fringes of the rainwood, a wet green world where brooks and rivers ran through dark forests and the ground was made of mud and rotting leaves. Huge willows grew along the watercourses [...] Trees pressed close on every side, shutting out the sun; hemlock and red cedars, white oaks, soldier pines that stood [tall] as towers, colossal sentinels, bigleaf maples, redwoods, wormtrees, even here and there a wild weirwood. Underneath their tangled branches ferns and flowers grew in profusion; sword ferns, ladyferns, bellflowers and piper's lace, evening stars and poison kisses, liverwort, lungwort, hornwort. Mushrooms sprouted down amongst the tree roots, and from their trunks as well [...] Other trees were furred with moss, green or grey or red-tailed, and once a vivid purple. Lichens covered every rock and stone. Toadstools festered besides rotting logs (TWoW)" - I could not find any Toadstools on rotting logs.
3. "solar, high in the Tower of Owls (TWoW)" - no solar panels on the tower.
4. "Mistwood is protected by walls, a gatehouse, and a keep. (awoiaf.westeros.org)" - The castle features both walls and a keep, though also more than one gatehouse!
Since the project is so old, I see no point in updating it and suggest a full redo.
best wishes,
Geal
I am requesting that Mistwood is exempted from the No-Redo Rule under clause 1(b) - Inadequate Cannon Clause.
1. "Instead of proper roads, they rode down crookback slashes that snaked this way and that, through clefts in huge mosscovered rocks and down deep ravines choked with blackberry brambles. Sometimes the track petered out entirely (TWoW)" - There is a distinct lack of deep ravines and crookback slashes in the project, a huge oversight that must be dealt with swiftly.
2. "Dusk found them on the fringes of the rainwood, a wet green world where brooks and rivers ran through dark forests and the ground was made of mud and rotting leaves. Huge willows grew along the watercourses [...] Trees pressed close on every side, shutting out the sun; hemlock and red cedars, white oaks, soldier pines that stood [tall] as towers, colossal sentinels, bigleaf maples, redwoods, wormtrees, even here and there a wild weirwood. Underneath their tangled branches ferns and flowers grew in profusion; sword ferns, ladyferns, bellflowers and piper's lace, evening stars and poison kisses, liverwort, lungwort, hornwort. Mushrooms sprouted down amongst the tree roots, and from their trunks as well [...] Other trees were furred with moss, green or grey or red-tailed, and once a vivid purple. Lichens covered every rock and stone. Toadstools festered besides rotting logs (TWoW)" - I could not find any Toadstools on rotting logs.
3. "solar, high in the Tower of Owls (TWoW)" - no solar panels on the tower.
4. "Mistwood is protected by walls, a gatehouse, and a keep. (awoiaf.westeros.org)" - The castle features both walls and a keep, though also more than one gatehouse!
Since the project is so old, I see no point in updating it and suggest a full redo.
best wishes,
Geal
