Probation: Myrwhyck

[mushimi]

(REPOST, ORIGINAL THREAD MADE ON 22nd AUG, 2017)

Excited to get started

First build.
Fisher, 3 people.
/warp csdferry
x- 1880 / y- 35 / z- 13148
(((APPROVED)))
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Second build.
House count, low class.
/warp whiteharbour
x- 1999 / y- 54 /z- 2730
(((APPROVED)))
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Third build.
Fisherman, low class.
/warp whsprawl
x- 2125 / y- 39 / z- -2178
(((APPROVED)))
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Fourth build.
Fisherman, low class.
/warp csdferry
x- 1885 / y- 35 / z- 13119
(((APPROVED)))
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Fifth build.
Chandler, middle/low class.
/warp whsprawl
x- 2171 / y- 39 / z- -1207
(((APPROVED)))
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Sixth build.
Cooper, middle/low class.
/warp whsprawl
x- 2161 / y- 40 / z- -2107
(((APPROVED)))

 

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Seventh build.
Cooper, middle/low class.
/warp uffvillage
x- -6166 / y- 36 / z- 17747
(((APPROVED)))

 

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Eighth build.
Cobbler, middle/low class.
/warp whsprawl
x- 2218 / y- 40 / z- -2123
(((APPROVED)))

 

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Ninth build.
Fisherman, middle/low class.
/warp whsprawl
x- 2227 / y- 40 / z- -2103
(((APPROVED)))

 

[Arkilstorm]

Hey Myr, sorry for the delay! Looked over all your builds, and have to say they're all great! The only thing to remember is that rafters should always span the shortest distance possible, for added support (try not to have the rafters beneath the floor above span from the front to the back of the building).

Other than that, great work! You're on a roll!

 

[mushimi]

Hey Myr, sorry for the delay! Looked over all your builds, and have to say they're all great! The only thing to remember is that rafters should always span the shortest distance possible, for added support (try not to have the rafters beneath the floor above span from the front to the back of the building).

Other than that, great work! You're on a roll!

No worries about the wait, I'm not too bothered about that Thanks!!

Tenth build.
Farmer, low class.
/warp lht
x- -8357 / y- 56 / z- 17646
(((APPROVED)))

 

[Arkilstorm]

Your Tenth build is really lovely. I saw that MD gave you a lot of feedback, which it looks like you've incorporated really well. The garden is really gorgeous, nicely done! - One thing, and I know I've mentioned it before, try to use slabs and stairs to create rafters beneath the floor above. You've used two slabs stacked or a whole oak block to create a rafter and it looks a bit bulky. I know this house has already been approved, but it doesn't hurt to be consistent.

Really nice work!

 

[mushimi]

Your Tenth build is really lovely. I saw that MD gave you a lot of feedback, which it looks like you've incorporated really well. The garden is really gorgeous, nicely done! - One thing, and I know I've mentioned it before, try to use slabs and stairs to create rafters beneath the floor above. You've used two slabs stacked or a whole oak block to create a rafter and it looks a bit bulky. I know this house has already been approved, but it doesn't hurt to be consistent.

Really nice work!

Thanks man, appreciate it Yeah I actually had used just stair blocks on the rafters there but MD actually changed that part lol

 

[Arkilstorm]

Ah no worries! I did think it was a bit strange for you to have done that! Nevermind. Keep up the great work!

 

[Arkilstorm]

Congratulations Myr! Welcome to the Team!

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