Probation: Hannojo

Hannojo

Mummer
Guest
1st House:
(Wealthy farmer with a small cattle pasture, vegetable garden, outhouse etc. attached).
1.) /warp Keath
2.) -977.550, 39, 4039.488
 

Hannojo

Mummer
Guest
2nd House:
(Poor fisherman with a vegetable garden, clothes & fish drying rack etc.).
1.) /warp glham1
2.) -6850.700, 42, -6625.488
 

Hannojo

Mummer
Guest
3rd House:
(Poor Farmer with a vegetable garden, clothes drying rack, outhouse, and chicken coup.)
1.) /warp Broom
2.) -4746.488, 37, 14940.451
 

Hannojo

Mummer
Guest
4th House:
(Farmer family of 3 with a vegetable garden, clothes drying rack, fire-wood storage etc).
1.) /warp RedLake
2.) -5482.488, 56, 15790.314
 

Hannojo

Mummer
Guest
5th House:
(Middle-class tailor & Clothier family of 6).
1.) /warp Ball
2.) -6291.587, 38, 18974.488
 
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Hannojo

Mummer
Guest
6th House:
(Low-class anti-social fieldhand with vegetable gardens, clothes drying rack, and wood storage).
1.) /warp Ball
2.) -6284.300, 40, 18964.454
 
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Hannojo

Mummer
Guest
7th House:
(Low-class fieldhand with clothes drying rack and firewood storage).
1.) /warp Ball
2.) -6284.468, 36, 19043.306
 

Hannojo

Mummer
Guest
8th House:
(Low-class recently moved in fieldhand family of 3 with clothes drying rack, firewood storage, outhouse, and strawberry garden).
1.) /warp Ball
2.) -6240.488, 36, 19036.514
 

Hannojo

Mummer
Guest
9th House:
(Middle-class candlemaker & lampright family of 6 with clothes drying rack and firewood storage).
1.) /warp Ball
2.) -6308.488, 37, 18975.533
 

Hannojo

Mummer
Guest
10th House:
(Low-class farmer with a vegetable garden, clothes drying rack, and outhouse).
1.) /warp Broom
2.) -4752.488, 37, 14922.592
 

Hannojo

Mummer
Guest
11th house:
(Low-class farmer with vegetable and flower garden, clothes drying rack, outhouse, firewood storage, and wagon).
1.) /warp Broom
2.) -4759.477, 37, 14923.512
 

otty

Sorcerer
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Hello Hannojo I got many houses Check I got most of the Broom ones in that little hamlet complete and I got the Keath, GLham1, and Redlake checked.
I meloned all those homes so you can visit them and check out more of my feedback

Tendencies I noticed
-Lots of food and rich items for poor families. IE Tools. These people were poor and often had alot a makeshift use stuff. Such as crates for tables etc.
-Tight interiors You don't need to fill the interiors to the brim with stuff, poor people couldn't afford much to stock their home with
-Outdoor seating is supposed to be a no-no for lower class peasants. They would use the majority of their space for crops.

You did well on following the style guides, gradients, and daub patterns but I'd like to push thinking logically about the lifestyles of people back then. Poor people had very little, so provide them such!
 

Hannojo

Mummer
Guest
Hello Otty,

Thank you for taking the time to critique my builds. I have realized how frugal the poorer houses should be. I've fixed all the mistakes you've identified at the builds you have critiqued. I will take the knowledge I've gathered from this to improve my builds in the future.

Thanks,
~Hannojo.
 
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Hannojo

Mummer
Guest
12th House:
(Low-class cobbler family of 4 with a vegetable garden, clothes drying rack, and firewood storage.)
1.) /warp Ball
2.) -6284.402, 41, 18946.532
 

Hannojo

Mummer
Guest
13th House:
(Low-class shady fisherman family of 3 with fish drying rack and storage shed.)
1.) /warp Ball
2.) -6352.374, 36, 18928.300
 

Hannojo

Mummer
Guest
14th House:
(Low-class fieldhand family of 3 with firewood storage, vegetable gardens, outhouse, and clothes drying rack).
1.) /warp redlakevillage
2.) -5502.512, 56, 15796.485