Hey @otty
I'll post here my feedbacks for post approval of Cressey project (instead in wherever the thread actually is, as it's not in the Crownlands file)
- The gate to the main keep is closed, hence no one can visit it.
In the keep:
- in many places, you made inside shutters with jungle half doors, tho I think actual shutters would look better, they just look like wooden planks fixed on the walls
- in the Lord's bedroom, there are table drawers blocks with uncovered side
- in the Lord's bedroom, the green flag on the carved wooden panel looks weird as it's flying
- in the dungeons, why are there 5 pewter flagons? seems a lot for lower class guards. I'd put a barrel and a few pots instead
- where is the maester's bedroom? I can see the rookery, but the bedroom below has too straw beds, and no signs of a maester's office
In general, for the keep, I'd put a few more signs of live here and there, but very sparingly.
Overall it's good!
In the main village / lands:
- in the sept, only 3 gods?
- what is the thing behind the gallows?
- several houses (actually, lots of them) have no light inside (either with chimney or candle), they're indicated with a glowstone above them
- same for the 'industry' buildings, here just a lantern is fine (and not all the time, but still in some of the barns and such)
- the bee owner/candle maker has lots of beehives, for a small area right in the middle of the village, I'd remove at least half of them
I trust you on putting some lights in these lands,
and overall, once this is fixed, you can consider Cressey post-approved!
Sorry it took so long, and thanks again for finishing this project One more step to completion
I'll post here my feedbacks for post approval of Cressey project (instead in wherever the thread actually is, as it's not in the Crownlands file)
- The gate to the main keep is closed, hence no one can visit it.
In the keep:
- in many places, you made inside shutters with jungle half doors, tho I think actual shutters would look better, they just look like wooden planks fixed on the walls
- in the Lord's bedroom, there are table drawers blocks with uncovered side
- in the Lord's bedroom, the green flag on the carved wooden panel looks weird as it's flying
- in the dungeons, why are there 5 pewter flagons? seems a lot for lower class guards. I'd put a barrel and a few pots instead
- where is the maester's bedroom? I can see the rookery, but the bedroom below has too straw beds, and no signs of a maester's office
In general, for the keep, I'd put a few more signs of live here and there, but very sparingly.
Overall it's good!
In the main village / lands:
- in the sept, only 3 gods?
- what is the thing behind the gallows?
- several houses (actually, lots of them) have no light inside (either with chimney or candle), they're indicated with a glowstone above them
- same for the 'industry' buildings, here just a lantern is fine (and not all the time, but still in some of the barns and such)
- the bee owner/candle maker has lots of beehives, for a small area right in the middle of the village, I'd remove at least half of them
I trust you on putting some lights in these lands,
and overall, once this is fixed, you can consider Cressey post-approved!
Sorry it took so long, and thanks again for finishing this project
One more step to completion
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