Probation: Jakethesnake8_8

Jakethesnake8_8

Firemage
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he/him
whore house in /warp stoneysept -1452/39/11009
 

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Jakethesnake8_8

Firemage
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he/him
blacksmith in /warp holbeton -6402/44/-832
 

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Jakethesnake8_8

Firemage
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he/him
farmer in /warp rhysling -1867/45/16878
 

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Jakethesnake8_8

Firemage
Pronouns
he/him
house in /warp holt 2446 50-3466
 

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JohanKR850

Royal Messenger
Hey Targ, I’ll be your probationary leader :D
If you have any questions just ask. Remember to make sure the plot is open before building.
Try and see if you can build houses in 5 different styles, to better know the server styles and blocks. But if you cant find 5 diffrent styles as you state above, then just give me 5 houses at least (You can make several in the same style). And most of all, have a fun time building!!
I’d like to go through the houses in game as well as post the bullet points here.
 

JohanKR850

Royal Messenger
Probation build 1
I left more feedback at the house, so check it out. Here are the highlights:
  • When putting down thatch on the floor use both blocks and carpets, to make it bumpy.
  • Dont put toilets in low class houses, they can anywhere but inside their house lol. On larger plots you can SOMETIMES put one in the yard.
  • The firewood was turned upwards? i fixed it and remember to put in wattle for support.
Probation build 2
Here are the highlights:
  • 3 times have you left more than 1 uncovered side on a bench block, pls dont do that.
  • Again make the thatch on the floor in bigger patches.
  • Make one or two large beds insteadt of 3 small ones. They keep warm by being close to each other.
  • Give the chairs back support.
  • Remember firewood inside house.
  • The woolly half-roof? I dunno what its called but the big wool structure is a no go. Use wood, i made it, check it out at the house.
  • Add mud to yard.
  • I redid the kitchen patches. Remember to use more than just the mud block when doing a cabbage patch.
Probation build 3
Project lead allready left some feedback. Here are mu highlights:
  • The house has no rafters? i assume its a mistake lol
  • You used 2 of the same bench blocks? use 2 diffrent there is a limit to how many pans a person can use.
  • Table was odd. Just put it up against the wall if needed.
  • Make the bed a bit bigger, insteadt of just 2 slabs of thatch.
  • Remember smoke.
  • Try to fix the roof yourself, the project lead says its wrong. You might learn from doing it.
  • Yard i good, only thing is the firewood needs wattle support.
  • Dont put cheese in low class house. They can afford it.
Probation build 4
  • (Again) You used 2 of the same bench blocks? use 2 diffrent there is a limit to how many pans a person can use.
  • (Again) Make one or two large beds insteadt of 3 small ones. They keep warm by being close to each other.
  • (Again) Make the thatch on the floor in bigger patches. + Do it with dark thatch.
  • Just make the table 1x2 insteadt of 2x2.
  • No reason to have firewood in the upper floor, have it under the staircase in this house.
 

Jakethesnake8_8

Firemage
Pronouns
he/him
house in /warp duskendale 5271 4111686
 

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JohanKR850

Royal Messenger
Probation build 5
I left most of the feedback at the house.

Its goo to see you try to have a go at a bigger house. I left all the feedback in game, take a look at it.
But the ground floor is kinda odd? Its like a circle. Id like it if we can have a look at it together, and try to fix it. Or try to have a go at it yourself and i can check it again. But try to make it more open and dont use 4 cabinent blocks for a lowclass kitchen.
 

JohanKR850

Royal Messenger
Well i just stalked your app and it says youre from the the UK, and im from Denmark so it should not be that much of a problem. Also id like to see a few more houses, i have a plot at Knott if you cant find any. Just to make sure you have understood the feedback i have given you for the first houses.
 

Jakethesnake8_8

Firemage
Pronouns
he/him
im from the uk but i live in japan. there's a small window between thee time zones. Although if you wait till july 8th i'll be visiting england for a couple months. then it should be more convenient for both of us