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Probation: AeksioOndos
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The Spring 2023 edition of The Rookery is now out! Take a look to see the latest builds, guides, progress and development updates on the upcoming 1.18.2 switch. You can read it here:
https://indd.adobe.com/view/f943da18-ed77-4d55-845d-fee9bfa14247
Hey Aerio! I would love to take you up on your probation 
During your 1 month probation period I ask that you build 5 houses (in preferably different styles). It is required that you post the nearest warp to the build and the coordinates of the build. If you have any questions regarding any of this process, please feel free to send me a message through forums or mail me in game =)
And remember... My approval is different from the project leads approval... It is still required that you fix any feedback they give you!
Have fun,
Benja
During your 1 month probation period I ask that you build 5 houses (in preferably different styles). It is required that you post the nearest warp to the build and the coordinates of the build. If you have any questions regarding any of this process, please feel free to send me a message through forums or mail me in game =)
And remember... My approval is different from the project leads approval... It is still required that you fix any feedback they give you!
Have fun,
Benja
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Thanks _Benja. I've got my eye on a particular building in Erenfordham1 but haven't been able to start because of still being guest status. Should I contact a mod now or wait till one is online?
If you happen to catch a mod in game, please ping them to promote you to [N]Builder. I'll be sure to ask as well if I see one
So I don't know if you got the attention for a mod or not, but I have seen in-game that you are promoted to New Builder. Congratulations! Have fun building
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The small interior was quite a challenge. XYZ -788.331/35.00000/4507.139. The nearest warp is erenfordham1
Looks good! I only have a few pointers:
Interiors:
- I would add a closed basket slab to the top of the oven to show that they might have some food storage, whether it be a minimal amount or not, it's just a small bit of detail
- I would replace that grain bag that's being used as a dining chair for a dark/light thatch slab as the grain bag looks a little odd being used as seating
- My biggest thing I have to point out is the bedroom area: I feel like the way the beds are stacked are very irregular, a way you can fix this is to simply convert the two singular beds to a bunkbed and dropping the loft area down a block or so. I will leave an example on my plot to show you what I mean by that if you find yourself needing some guidance. *On the bottom floor near my name*
- To add onto the note above: /warp ikea is a good place to see some good bedroom examples (bunkbeds etc)
Exteriors:
I have very minimal concerns as far as your exteriors, a few pointers I may make, however, are:
- I would switch the wooden slabs above the log storage, they look pretty bulky. Some alternatives for this are: Wooden Carpet (Which can be found in your vanilla mc inventory, under decoration blocks), spruce wood carpet, or dark thatch carpet.
- To add a little more to the clothing rack, you could add a dry/full water barrel to show the clothes being washed.
Good job! I look forward to seeing the rest of your builds
Interiors:
- I would add a closed basket slab to the top of the oven to show that they might have some food storage, whether it be a minimal amount or not, it's just a small bit of detail
- I would replace that grain bag that's being used as a dining chair for a dark/light thatch slab as the grain bag looks a little odd being used as seating
- My biggest thing I have to point out is the bedroom area: I feel like the way the beds are stacked are very irregular, a way you can fix this is to simply convert the two singular beds to a bunkbed and dropping the loft area down a block or so. I will leave an example on my plot to show you what I mean by that if you find yourself needing some guidance. *On the bottom floor near my name*
- To add onto the note above: /warp ikea is a good place to see some good bedroom examples (bunkbeds etc)
Exteriors:
I have very minimal concerns as far as your exteriors, a few pointers I may make, however, are:
- I would switch the wooden slabs above the log storage, they look pretty bulky. Some alternatives for this are: Wooden Carpet (Which can be found in your vanilla mc inventory, under decoration blocks), spruce wood carpet, or dark thatch carpet.
- To add a little more to the clothing rack, you could add a dry/full water barrel to show the clothes being washed.
Good job! I look forward to seeing the rest of your builds
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Looks good! I only have a few pointers:
Interiors:
- I would switch the wooden slabs above the log storage, they look pretty bulky. Some alternatives for this are: Wooden Carpet (Which can be found in your vanilla mc inventory, under decoration blocks), spruce wood carpet, or dark thatch carpet.
- To add a little more to the clothing rack, you could add a dry/full water barrel to show the clothes being washed.
Good job! I look forward to seeing the rest of your builds
Thanks for the feedback. There is a reason there is no water barrel. my reasoning is that those in the cottage would wash the clothes in the river. hence why there is a basket and bundle of dirty clothing by the river
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Next house is in progress at rollingford just turn around from the warp and its there. XYZ 1579.807/39.49391/12722790
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though i did put it a trough
finished the rollingford house
also, third house is complete at lht XYZ:-8367.486/62.56903/17586.700
beginning on a tent in Mance's camp XYZ: -1494.366/43.53620/-20571.276
finished the rollingford house
also, third house is complete at lht XYZ:-8367.486/62.56903/17586.700
beginning on a tent in Mance's camp XYZ: -1494.366/43.53620/-20571.276
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wullham7house in progress
mance's camp tent finished
So thats
1:Erenford hamlet 1 farmer lowclass
2: Rollingford woodcutter lowclass
3:Lord Hewett's Town farmer lowclass
4: Mance's Camp tent
5: Wull Hamlet 7 hunter lowclass
needs a bit more variety
mance's camp tent finished
So thats
1:Erenford hamlet 1 farmer lowclass
2: Rollingford woodcutter lowclass
3:Lord Hewett's Town farmer lowclass
4: Mance's Camp tent
5: Wull Hamlet 7 hunter lowclass
needs a bit more variety
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LHT House:
Good job on this! I especially love the flow of the garden X)! I do, however, echo the concerns of the project lead (who left melons at the house) and I agree with the proposed changes =)
Also, the structure of the bed divider is a bit awkward, I would try fixing that cabinet and making it even, or substituting that for a wattle fence.
Very nice job!
Good job on this! I especially love the flow of the garden X)! I do, however, echo the concerns of the project lead (who left melons at the house) and I agree with the proposed changes =)
Also, the structure of the bed divider is a bit awkward, I would try fixing that cabinet and making it even, or substituting that for a wattle fence.
Very nice job!
Mance's Camp:
Very nice! Only one thing:
- There's a patch of fur showing on the back of the tent. Once you fix that, you're all set!
Very nice! Only one thing:
- There's a patch of fur showing on the back of the tent. Once you fix that, you're all set!
Wull Hamlet:
Very good work! Angled houses can be difficult and this was executed nicely!! I have no further feedback unless Cash has any pointers he'd like to make.
Good work!
Very good work! Angled houses can be difficult and this was executed nicely!! I have no further feedback unless Cash has any pointers he'd like to make.
Good work!
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this bundle of herbs is meant to be fleabane, something which Enah mentioned when I was still applying. I'll still lower it because I dont think it would be too effective so high